There are many ways of making a pen different and indeed every pen is unique to some degree, even when you try to duplicate a batch of pens, they are never exactly the same.
What you have done here is created a pen that is quite unique. I think we have all tried that kind of design in our pen making experiments and like it or hate it, it is a pen with its own individuality. Personal tastes differ about such radical design but you have done a pretty good job on your pen.