Looks pretty good for a first attempt!
As my old ww teacher used to say,
"if you never made a mistake you never made anything"
"The difference between an apprentice and a master craftsman is the latter is better at hiding his mistakes"
"There's no such thing as a mistake if you treat it as a learning opportunity"
"Wanting to learn how to rescue a mistake is the mark of a good student"
He had dozens of these saying which he would say in a mocking voice but it was really meant to keep us going when disaster struck.